Tuesday 16 July 2013

 AgniVarsha - The Incomplite Love Story

Update 2- The scary Dream




dopehar ka waqt tha lekin wahan pura ghana andhera raat tha Agni ek aise jungle main tha jaha suraj ki ek halki roshni bhi dikhayi nehi deti thi jaise amavas ki raat ho wahan pe itna sanata tha ke jaise wahan saitano ka vaas ho agni dhire dhire age badhta hai usi waqt use achanak koyi awaaz sunai deti hai agni ke kadam wahin pe ruk jata hai aur wo piche mudke dekhta hai kii ye kishki awaaz hai ek baar phir wo awaaz ati hai jise sunke agni ke dil ki dhadkane tej ho jati hain wauuuuuuuuu wauuuuuuuuu ye awaaz sunke wo samaj jata ke ye bhediyon ka awaaz hai aur wo samaj jata hai ki bhediye sayad uske liye arahe hain darr ke mare ushke pair wahin jam jate hain woh hill bhi nahin paa raha tha woh bhagne ki koshis kar raha tha lekin wo hill bhi nahin paa raha tha dekhte hi dekhte wo awaaz aur karib arahi thi aur karib aur karib aur karib aur achanak uske samne bhediye aaa jate hain dekh te hi dekh te wahan bhediyon ka pura ka pura jhund jama ho jata hai jaise wo thann ke aye hain ho ki shikar karna hii hai unn bhedhiyon ko to dekh kar kisika bhi khoon safed ho jaye wo sare bhediye bahut bade the ek ek ki hight kam se kam 6 se 7 foot hogi hi wo bhediye aam bhediyon se alag the unka speed unke hight unke ankhe jo laal thi agr ankhon me dekhon to lage jese unke ankhe jal rahi ho achanak se wo sare bhediye hatt jate hain unke beach se ek bahut bada bhediya samne
ata hai uska ek ankh pe khanjar ka nisan hota hai jise dekh agni ki ankhe phati ki phati reh jati hain aur achanak wo bhediya bhokta hai wauuuuuuuuuu wauuuuuuuuu aur agle pal agni ke uper chalang maar deta hai aur tabhi achanak agni ki ankh khul jati hai aur uska sapna toot jata hai wo pura ka pura paseene se bheega hua hota hai uske paas uska bhatija khada hoke ushe kab se awaaz de raha tha agni ke bhatije ka naam isaan hai isaan agni se kehta hai chachu jaldi uthiye dadi bula rahi hai ajj monday hai aur apko dadi ko leker mandir bhi to jana hai aur lot ke mujhe,raju aur didi ko school bhi pahunchana hai jaldi uthiye chachu phir agni kehta hai abe uth to raha hoon ja bhag yahan se aur dadi ko bol 15 min me aya aur agni bed se uth jata hai aur apne sapne ke bare me sochne lagta hai are yaar ish sapne se mera picha kab chootega main kab raat ko chen se so sakunga pata nahin bachpan se hii mujhe ye sapna rojana kyun ata hai aur wo sala kana bhediya bhachapan se hii mere piche pada hai kahin mera ish sapne se koi link to nahin hai yahi sochte sochte uski nazar calender pe padta hai aur kuch yaad ata hai are ajj to collage khulne wala hai aur ajj wo apne juniors ki jam ke raging karega,,,deva to raat ko so bhi nahin paya hoga raging ko lekar sala tharki hai na ajj to sayed hii wo kishi ladki ko chode raging ke naam par aur wo muskura deta hai aur ush kane bhediye ko galiyan bakte hue bathroom me ghoos jata hai,,,,idhar niche agni ki maa drawing room me beth ke agni ko galiyan de rahi thi nalayak kahin kaa kitna der kar raha hai kitne samay lagata hai bathroom ke andar lagta hai me ajj let ho jayegi hospital bhi jana hai aur laat sahab abhi tak nahin aye ushi waqt wahan agni ajata hai aur dekhta hai ke maa pura ka pura gusse me hai to wo jake unke pair chunke good morning bolta hai or maa ka gussa thoda kam ho jata hai aur apne maa ko leke pehle mandir or phir hospital pe drop karta hai aur ghar akar apne bhatiji aur bhatijon ko school drop karta hai aur wahan se apne deva ke ghar pe chala jata hai jahan jagu aur deva uska intajaar kar rahe the aur agni ko dekte hi wo dono baras pade deva jyada gussa tha kyuki use raging jo leni thi agni bola bas kar be nahin to ek mukka de dunga sale aur wo bhi free sari hero giri dhari ki dhari reh jayegi aur karliyo raging ye sun deva kii phat jati hai aur wo kehta abe bura maan gaya kya hum to mazak kar rahe the chal sale narayan ke dukan pe tujhe cigarette pilata hoon agni ne moo banate hue bola lekin main menthol hii piunga sale tune mera mood kharab kar diya hai deva bola chal thik hai tu bhi kya yaad karega kish dildar se pala pada hai aur phir teenon chal dete hai narayan ke dukan pe

8 comments:

  1. very nice update agni

    lagta hai ye ek thriller story hai

    i love thriller story

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    1. thanxxxxxxx raveena jii

      haan raveena jii ye ek thriller story hai

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  2. bohut hii badhiya update tha janab

    lagta hai ye ek thriller love story hai

    keep it up

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    1. thanxxxxxxx kamini dear

      haam kamini dear ye ek thriller love story hai

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